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May 18, 2008

Well, the residency is coming up…

Filed under: General — Tags: , , — Val @ 10:24 pm

My flight leaves in four days, ack so much to do! I am so looking forward to it tho, it will be my first real break since the accident. (Six weeks out of work due to injuries does NOT count as a break.) There is still a lot of reading I need to do to be ready, but I should be fine.

So I have ten stories out right now, which is everything I have polished. I’m still working on getting more polished, but of course this is taking a temporary back seat until the residency is over.

I have to clean my house too, I hate coming back to a messy house after being gone. I so wish I could say, Go go Gadget house cleaner! Heh

April 10, 2008

I….Made….It….

Filed under: MoN — Tags: , — Val @ 11:06 pm

The first full revision of Moving on Nightfall is done! The last 30 pages were aaaaaagonizing. Onto the next revision, it has been a while since I saw the beginning of the book, (like several months) so I am comfortible with jumping back to the beginning and going from there. I’m sure it will go fine again, until maybe the end 40 or 30 pages.

Whew! That was quite a job! But another milestone accomplished :D

April 1, 2008

Revising, the process

Filed under: Revision — Tags: , — Val @ 6:15 pm

I wrote about the stress of revising my novel last week, and how with a long work sometimes I find it a challenge to make it all of the way through revision process. The comments to that post inspired me to think a bit about my process of writing and revising, and analyze a bit why I write the way I do.

When I write I tend not to revise as I go. There are several reasons for that, one being that I can sit down and turn out 1-3000 words pretty easily once I get going, and revising takes time away when I am trying to get it down, particularly if I am writing a novel. It is very easy to get bogged down in revising, and use it as an excuse not to write, or to get distracted. With shorter works I can sit down and bang them all out pretty fast. The other reason is generally I write, and then I let it sit for a bit before I go back and start revising, even if it just a few days. That gives it time to settle and the whole piece feels a lot more jelled when I go back to it.

I break my rule a bit when writing novels, because I don’t plan any of my writing out beforehand. I generally know a scene or two ahead of where I am currently writing, and so if the plot changes from something I wrote before I’ll go back and tweak where it varies from the current direction, again not necessarily a lot of editing, but enough that when I go back to revise I know what I am doing.

In revising short stories I do everything as I go along - language, spelling, plot holes, character issues, etc. In revising my novel I do the same thing, from beginning to end, but where as short stories generally need one really hard edit and then a few refining edits, I know I am going to need a second hard edit for this book. As the novel is all drafted down I know how it ends and how the plot is going to go, and as I revise for the first time there is a lot of scenes where I either need to or choose to do a lot of rewriting, sometimes a few pages worth. there are also scenes, more towards the end, that I rushed through and summarized when I got tired, and those I expand. But I also pay attention to grammar, spelling, characterization, language, all that, so the second hard edit isn’t to focus on those issues, it is to go over the more jelled together novel as if I am revising it for the first time, to turn it fully into something I can do polishing edits on.

January 31, 2008

Revising, Revision, Rewriting

Filed under: MoN, Revision — Tags: , , , — Val @ 11:24 pm

I’m on the down stretch of the first major revision of Moving on Nightfall. I think the last 40 pages need to be expanded a bit, as when I got near to finishing my rough draft I just wanted to get it down. Plus, now that I know how it ends, I have to smooth out all of the continuity issues that exist because of my characters doing things other than what I had planned for them. Sometimes this is as small as changing a sentence, but I have also totally rewritten some scenes.

As a character, Jenny changes and grows quite a bit through the book. She’s tough and street-smart, and she knows how to survive, but at the same time she rolls with the punches and doesn’t always stand up for herself, instead focusing on survival. That is one of the things that change about her as the novel goes on, in that she thinks about what she wants, how to get it, and how to stand up for herself even when she’s scared. It’s always good when a character grows through the progression of a story. It is when they don’t change and/or grow as I write that I have to stop and re-evaluate what I am putting down. If the characters don’t change, when realistically they should be, I know I am heading down the wrong way and need to take a step back from my write and figure out where I went wrong.

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