Apr 102008
The first full revision of Moving on Nightfall is done! The last 30 pages were aaaaaagonizing. Onto the next revision, it has been a while since I saw the beginning of the book, (like several months) so I am comfortible with jumping back to the beginning and going from there. I’m sure it will go fine again, until maybe the end 40 or 30 pages.
Whew! That was quite a job! But another milestone accomplished 
Congrats!!